Camp Writing - E-portfolio

Motivation:

Camp Experiences

Learning Objectives:

Level 3

• Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

Level 4

• Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.

Learning goals:

• To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
• A variety of sentence starters
• A variety of sentence lengths
• Edit and rework
• Effective peer checking and feedback

  Getting pulled higher an higher as the harness tugs on my skin. As If i was being strangered. I finally get to the top struggling to breathe. As all of a sudden all this fear builds up inside me in seconds. Until it all came out in a big loud scream! I finally shoot down but in style! About a minute later the swing starts slowing down! As they hook me up for the second time. I see the rest of the people in my group pulling me up as i get higher and higher as they lift me up off the ground.

This time I knew what was coming! As I see little people pulling me up of the ground. They stop and I just float in they sky as William shouts. Sarah are you ready! As they start counting down 3! 2! 1! Screams eco the air! As I get released from the sky. Swinging side to side i start slowing down again. As I look down at my friends putting there harness's on ready to go up onto the giant swing!

I did well because I used a lot of punctuation and edited my writing really well and used my grammar spelling and punctuation.